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oskar345
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|  | Reverie
« Thread Started on Oct 30, 2009, 10:46am » | |
Reverie
Dreams have always been vital to me they have been a wing
To fly on for my consciousness, but lately there have been few
dreams and when I dream it is about places I have been to in
other thoughts, meeting people and seeing a nature that is
interior where the landscape it thorny and cannot be shared
with others. There is strangeness to see friends that do not exist,
familiar faces forever young they will just be there and not tell
me what to do, a burden one has to tolerate in conscious life.
My phone doesn’t ring although I’ve a funny, musical ringer tone.
By the lake of wonder virtual friends silently gather, look at me
as to say: “When are you going to be our real friend?”But I will
not leave before I feel the joy of embracing you again, when
you stroke my vanishing hair and tell me that you love me
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oceanangel
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| | Re: Reverie
« Reply #1 on Oct 30, 2009, 2:10pm » | |
Hey Oskar, thats a lot of poems youve got going there, can i ask why you still print them here when no-ones around anymore?
by the way, this is a gd poem, very heavy laden with lonely images but def pushes the right buttons.
I would prefer it to be laid out in a poem structure tho.
Nicely done.
Ocean (smile)
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